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Larisa · **Posted:** Sat Apr 19, 2008 6:27 pm

That's the last thing I've made... It's pastel on A4 paper.

comments & critics plz

Nebott · **Joined:** Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:16 am **Posts:** 16

Very good.

I like it, it has a warm effect.

I only suggest you to make tones degradations more large and soft.

But well it's very nice like it is.

Chalky · **Posted:** Sun Apr 20, 2008 8:51 am

Morning Larisa,

Fine work mate.

I like it too.

Maybe the boat could have been a bit more to one side (perhaps the right), as it's a bit central.
And I think i would have added less birds.

Great colours.

Skills L :wink:

wendymassey · **Joined:** Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:06 pm **Posts:** 48

Love the colours, Larissa.

I agree with Chalky about the boat/people. It's a bit of a focal point and as such would work better at one side.

I like all the birds though! I am sure it would work with fewer birds, but I like the feeling the birds give to the overall picture.

Larisa · **Posted:** Sun Apr 20, 2008 2:04 pm

Thanx 4 comments...

you're right, maybe the boat really should be more to right side... but about the birds-it's so many of them because I wanted to give the impression of dynamics. :wink:

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